This week some of our Kōwhiringa learners read a story about Para (the narrator) and her older brother, Shane, as they practise their rugby league skills in their backyard, then play a game of league with the rest of their team.
A task was set for these learners to write a rugby story about their favourite rugby mascot. They wrote and then published their piece of writing on Explain Everything.
Have a look at their stories below.
Friday, 7 September 2018
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Hi Kotuku wow those storys flew me away. It was like I was reading the storys of the press. Next time you could make a newspaper atercle about it. Why did you chose these mascotes and why? from Ella
ReplyDeleteHi up the guts group
ReplyDeleteI lIke the storys that you did it was very funny
Next time write a newspaper (like Ella said)
How did it take you to make?
Hi Ella and Aroha, Thank you for your comments. We really liked writing our stories and think that your suggestion about writing a newspaper article is great. It took us three reading sessions to research the mascots, write our stories and publish them on Explain Everything. From Elise, Lucas, Kees, Matthew and Prithekam.
DeleteHi up the guts group.i like how you got to pick how you made it. How much time did you guys get to
ReplyDeleteFinish your fabulous work. I like how you made your stories
From Blake a